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A fiery red-orange sunset bathes the sea a bloody color, but the girl on the shore doesn't care.
All she feels is the salt spray on her face. All she smells is the crisp air around her. Her eyes are glazed over and a dreamy smile lies delicately on her lips. Sitting on that sand, the cares of the world disappear and a beautiful daydream takes their place.
Watching in the distance is a young man. The ghost of a smile flickers across his face as he watches the young woman in the sunset. Suddenly he stands and hesitantly takes a few steps away from the figure. He stops, mutters to himself. His back straightens up and his shoulders straighten. All at once he swings around and in his eyes is a frightening look of fiery determination.
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I'm also going to add "the way too" Poem for English. It's the way to come up with a story and is exactly what happened to me on Wednesday night.
The way to come up with a story
Close your eyes and listen well
The orchestra plays a song just for you
All that now remains is for you,
Yes, you, to find the story.
The story hidden within the notes
Close your eyes,
Wipe your mind blank,
Let it wander,
Unloose the shackles of your logic
Feel the music
Internalize it,
Then slowly, your mind will fill,
Fill with colorful images
A story will grow and flourish,
The images will glow and bloom
Burning into your mind
Then take pencil and paper
And write, write until your mind
Is blank once more
And the story is written
Then, once more
Close your eyes
And listen
Listen
Wow, that is incredible. I can't just take a song and make a story out of it. I've tried, but for some reason, it just doesn't connect in my head. You are very talented!
ReplyDeleteThat's it.....what happens?
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